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Once there lived a scholar. Although he was as 56. ___________
poor as a church mouse, he was afraid for losing 57. __________
face. One night the thief broke into his house, 58. __________
but could find nothing worth of stealing. The 59. __________
thief murmured, "What a bad luck! 60. __________
I've run into a rich man's house! " 61. __________
Heard this, the scholar quickly took a few coins 62. __________
from his pocket what he had managed to save , and then 63. __________
run after the thief. When he caught up with the thief, 64. __________
he whispered, "Just took away these coins. Please 65. __________
don't let anyone know about my poverty ... don't let me lose face ! "
56. √. 57. for→of, be afraid of 為固定搭配. 58. the →a, 故事敘述過程中,第一次被提到的人或物前使用不定冠詞. 59. 去掉of . worth 直接跟名詞活動詞的ing形式.
60. 去掉 a, luck 為不可數名詞 61. rich 應為 poor. 由文意可知. 62 Heard-Hearing, hearing 與主語 the scholar 為邏輯主謂關系E, 用現在分詞作狀語.
63. 去掉what 或將 what 改為which /that, 用which/that 引導定語從句, 且在從句充當賓語 64. run→ ran, and 連接兩個并列句,要求 與took 時態一致. 65. took → take 在直接引語的祈使句中謂語用動詞原形.
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